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(Adapted from Behrens, Laurence and Leonard J. Rosen. Writing and Reading Across the Curriculum, 5th ed. New York Harper Collins, 1996.)
| Article Summary | Interpretive Answer | |
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Purpose |
To give a brief report; material is condensed through paraphrasing. |
To influence or persuade an audience; material is expanded. |
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Central Idea |
Yes — stated in first sentence with author's name and article title. |
Yes — given in thesis; if only one paragraph, then stated in topic sentence. |
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Key Points |
Yes -- identified and listed in summary in order author gives them in article. |
Yes — set up in optional essay map |
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Details, Examples Given? |
No — omitted |
Yes — crucial for paragraph development; draw from personal experience, general knowledge, observation; describe with specific, vivid detail. |
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Opinions Given? |
No — objective report |
Yes — a good thesis relates a specific point of view, |
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Formal Introduction & Conclusion? |
No |
No, though a concluding sentence might help unify your supporting points. |
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Divided Into Paragraphs? |
Maybe — depends on length of original. |
Maybe — depends on length of original. |
How to Paraphrase
Use synonyms for key words in the original.
Do not simply substitute a form of a word in the original.
Do not use any three successive words from the original.
Rearrange or alter the sentence structure of the original.
Fairly represent the author's idea as it is conveyed in the original.
Example 1
From Jessica Mitford's Kind and Usual Punishment, page
9:
ORIGINAL:
The character and mentality of the keepers may be of more importance in
understanding prisons than the character and mentality of the kept.
PLAGIARISM
But the character of prison officials (the keepers) is more important in
understanding prisons than the character of prisoners (the kept).
PARAPHRASE:
One critic of the penal system maintains that we may be able to learn more about
prisons from the psychology of the prison officials than from that of the
prisoners (Mitford 9).
Example 2
From Rachel Carson's The Edge of the Sea, page 30:
ORIGINAL:
The records of paleontology provide evidence of the changing shapes of
continents and the changing flow of the ocean currents, for these earlier earth
patterns account for the otherwise mysterious present distribution of many
plants and animals.
PLAGIARISM:
The mysterious
distribution of animals and plants is accounted for by changing continent shapes
and changing flow of ocean currents.
PARAPHRASE:
According to Rachel Carson, geologists can account for why particular plants and
animals are found at particular places on the planet by studying ancient fossils
which indicate that land masses altered as ocean currents shifted (30).
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